BENEATH THE RUSTLING ALMOND TREE
Part 1: The Beginning of Us
The sun
was gentle that morning, casting a mellow glow over Agodi Gardens. The scent of
roasted corn wafted through the air, mingling with the sweet fragrance of
hibiscus. Ibadan was awake, vibrant, yet slow in its rhythm, as if the city
itself took deep breaths before surrendering to the day.
Bode
always said that the city had a soul—a quiet one, battered and beautiful. He
was the kind of man who carried storms behind a smile. Tall, lean, always in
his kaftan with sleeves rolled to the elbows, and a book clutched in hand. He
believed too much in poetry, in people, in possibilities.
Kunbi was
different. The kind of woman whose laughter lingered long after the sound had
gone. She had eyes like bottled secrets and a wit sharp enough to slice through
Bode’s idealism. She sold handmade jewelry at Bodija market, though her dreams
stretched far beyond the rusted stalls and bargaining voices.
And then
there was Marvy.
If Bode
was the storm, Marvy was the fire—reckless, impulsive, brilliant. He came into
their lives like a monsoon, sweeping away boundaries, building bridges of
moments. He was Bode’s oldest friend from university—same room, same hunger for
something more. But where Bode sought depth, Marvy chased thrill. They balanced
each other like dusk and dawn.
The three
of them became something of a myth in their neighborhood. Always
together—laughing by the roadside bukas, dancing in dimly-lit clubs off Ring
Road, having deep, midnight conversations on Bode’s rooftop overlooking the
city’s ancient brown roofs. There was nothing they couldn’t say to one
another—or so they believed.
But
beneath all the laughter and long walks, there were things unsaid. Things
waiting to unravel.
Part 2: What the Heart Knows
It
started, as most betrayals do, quietly.
Kunbi
began to notice the way Bode looked at her—not just as a friend anymore. His
glances lingered. His voice softened. And when he spoke to her, it felt like
the world went still for a second. She’d always known Bode was different. He
listened like her words were scripture, like every laugh she gave was a song
he’d been waiting to hear.
She should
have shut it down. She should have said something. But she didn’t. Because deep
down, she felt it too.
They
didn’t say it out loud, but it was there—in shared silences, the accidental
touches, the way they held each other’s gaze just a second too long. It felt
dangerous and holy all at once.
And then
came that night.
It was
after Marvy’s birthday. The three of them had gone to a lounge near Ventura
Mall, danced until their feet ached, drank palm wine, and told stupid stories.
But Marvy was distracted—he left early with some girl he met by the bar, his
usual way of ending nights. Bode and Kunbi were left alone, walking under a
bruised Ibadan sky.
“I feel
like I’m waiting for something that never comes,” Bode had said, hands in his
pockets, voice low.
Kunbi
didn’t respond. She just took his hand.
And that
was the beginning of everything they never meant to do.
For weeks,
they lived in that strange space between love and guilt. Behind Marvy’s back,
they became more than friends. Secret walks in Eleyele, kisses stolen behind
market stalls, quiet Sundays in Bode’s one-room apartment near Mokola Hill. It
was sweet. It was selfish. It was inevitable.
But Marvy
was no fool.
He noticed
the change—the way Bode avoided his eyes, the way Kunbi flinched when he
touched her. One night, drunk and angry, he asked Kunbi outright, “Are you
sleeping with him?”
She paused
too long.
And that
silence broke something that would never be fixed.
Part 3: Cracks in the Ceiling
The truth
came out not in a shout, but in a whisper.
Marvy
didn’t rage, didn’t fight. He just…left. Walked out of Kunbi’s small flat in
Challenge and disappeared into the Ibadan night, leaving the door open behind
him like a wound. She sat there, shaking, hands still smelling of onions from
the ogbono soup she had just served.
When Bode
came the next morning, she didn’t have to say anything. He saw it in her eyes.
“He
knows.”
Bode
didn’t say a word for a long time. Then he sat beside her, took her hand, and
said quietly, “We did this.”
For days,
Marvy was unreachable. His phone rang out. His Instagram, once a stream of wild
energy—gym selfies, club nights, political rants—went cold. Even his mother,
who ran a small tailoring shop near Oje, hadn’t seen him.
When he
finally resurfaced, it was at Bode’s door.
Rain was
falling hard that evening, flooding the alleyways, turning the red Ibadan dust
into thick, bloody mud. Bode opened the door and found him there—drenched, eyes
bloodshot, bottle of Seaman’s Gin in one hand.
“Let’s
talk.”
They
didn’t talk.
They
shouted.
The kind
of shouting that made neighbors pretend not to hear. Fists were thrown. Bode’s
lip split. Marvy’s knuckles bled. The air was thick with grief, and every word
was a slap.
“You were
my brother,” Marvy yelled, voice cracking. “And you chose her over us.”
“I didn’t
choose,” Bode said, tears mixing with blood. “It just happened. I didn’t plan—”
“That’s
the problem. You never planned. You just let things happen. You let her happen
to us.”
Silence
stretched long between them. Then Marvy laughed—cold, bitter.
“She’ll
leave you too. Just wait.”
And with
that, he left.
Part 4: Things That Don’t Heal
The
silence between Bode and Kunbi began as a crack, then widened like a sinkhole.
They still
saw each other, still lay beside each other in Bode’s bed, but the closeness
was gone. Where once there was laughter and warmth, now there was a dull
ache—like a wound being picked at every day.
Bode tried
to salvage it. He’d cook for her, take her to the old places—the bookshop in
Jericho, the ice cream stand at Ventura—but everything felt like trying to glue
together a shattered vase. No matter how carefully he pieced it back, it still
leaked.
And Kunbi…
she was drifting.
One
afternoon, while rain beat down on their zinc roof, she said the words he
always feared.
“I don’t
think I love you the way I thought I did.”
Bode
turned from the window, heart skipping. “What do you mean?”
“I think I
was in love with the idea of you. Of what we could be. But all I feel now is...
tired.”
“Tired of
me?”
“No. Tired
of us.”
She left
two days later. Packed her things in a quiet hurry and moved to her aunt’s
house in Iwo Road. She didn’t cry. She just kissed his forehead and said, “I’m
sorry.”
And Bode?
He didn’t
stop her.
Marvy came
back into the picture a few weeks later. Not by choice—but by tragedy.
It was a
Saturday when the call came.
Marvy’s
younger brother, Dayo, had died in a bike accident near UI gate. Marvy had been
the one raising him since their father passed. He was all the family Marvy had
left.
Bode heard
the news at a barber’s shop in Sango. He left mid-cut, hair half-trimmed, and
went straight to Marvy’s mother’s house.
And there
he was—sitting in the corner, holding Dayo’s schoolbag like a child might hold
a teddy bear. His eyes were dry. Too dry.
Bode
didn’t say anything. He just sat beside him, shoulder to shoulder.
“I hated
you,” Marvy said eventually.
“I know.”
“But I
missed you more than I hated you.”
“I missed
you too.”
They
didn’t hug. Men like them didn’t. But the silence between them finally
softened.
Grief has
a way of making room for forgiveness.
But time,
as always, had other plans.
One
evening, months later, as the harmattan winds blew dust across Ibadan’s old
roads, Bode received a voice note from Kunbi.
Her voice
was shaky, distant.
“Bode… I’m
sorry. I should’ve told you earlier. I’m pregnant.”
The world
froze.
He
replayed it four times.
Pregnant.
His mind
ran wild. When? How? Why now?
He called.
No answer. He texted. Nothing.
Then
another message came through.
“It’s not
yours.”
Part 5: The Last Rain in Ibadan
Bode
stared at his phone for hours that night. Long after the lights went out in
Mokola, after the clamor of danfos had died down and the streetlights flickered
like tired stars. Kunbi was pregnant. And it wasn’t his.
He didn’t
cry. He just sat still. Numb.
When dawn
broke, he went walking. Past the rusted taxis, past the street preachers with
megaphones, past the bakery with the same brown loaves they’d once shared. He
walked all the way to Agodi Gardens—their old place. The almond tree was still
there, leaves whispering secrets only the wind could understand.
He sat
beneath it, remembering everything.
Their
laughter. The fire in Marvy’s eyes. Kunbi’s head on his chest. That one moment
in time when love made everything seem endless.
And now?
All gone.
The next
time he saw Kunbi, she was heavily pregnant, belly round beneath a flowing
ankara gown. She looked beautiful. Tired. Older.
They met
at a small amala spot near Orita. She’d asked him to come.
“I didn’t
know how to tell you,” she said, playing with her spoon. “I didn’t want to hurt
you more than I already had.”
“Who’s the
father?”
She looked
down.
“Marvy.”
The world
stopped again.
Bode
blinked. “I thought… you two stopped talking.”
“It was
one night. After Dayo’s funeral. We were both broken.”
He nodded slowly.
No words came.
Kunbi
reached out, touched his hand. “I didn’t plan it. But I’m keeping the baby.”
He didn’t
pull away. But he didn’t hold her hand either.
“I hope he
looks like you,” she whispered. “Gentle. Kind.”
And then
she left.
Bode
changed after that.
He
withdrew. Stopped writing. Stopped showing up to his tutoring job. People
stopped seeing him around. Marvy reached out once or twice, trying to make
peace, but Bode never replied. He loved them both too much to hate them—but not
enough to survive them.
And one
rainy night, exactly one year after Dayo’s funeral, bode climbed the rusted
stairs of Bower’s Tower.
Ibadan lay
below him, glowing faintly, tired like an old song. The rain was soft, like
tears from the sky. He stood at the edge, hands trembling.
No one
knows what he was thinking in that final moment. Whether he saw Kunbi’s smile,
or Marvy’s laugh. Whether he remembered their promises or their betrayal.
All they
found the next morning was a notebook. Soaked through.
On the
last page, in smeared ink, were four words:
“Forgive
me. I tried.”
Epilogue
Marvy
never forgave himself.
Kunbi
named the child Bode.
And every
year, on the anniversary of his death, she takes the boy to Bower’s Tower. They
sit under the almond tree in Agodi Gardens. She tells him stories of a boy who
loved too deeply. Who believed in friendship. Who wrote poems that smelled like
Ibadan dust and rain.
And in the
silence, when the wind picks up, the leaves still rustle with the memory of
love lost too soon.
AROWOLO ADEYEMI OLASUNKANMI



Comments
The writing style, the storyline, the language, the necessary pauses and breaks, the subtle dialogue, the plot - everything.
It was engaging. I loved the story. It would make for a beautiful movie. One that would create those moments that you'll wish lasts forever, and tears too. Because my eyes nearly watered when I saw the shadow of blood underneath the tower.
I only glanced through the words that first time, and read the first paragraph a second time. I thought it was just a story. I didn't know it was a masterpiece.